Sunday, June 30, 2013

Chapter 10

Then, all of the sudden a fox did come out of the bush. Oh great. Why now? Wings thought, and she hoped she wasn't thinking out loud. Suddenly, she found herself staring at four more birds. Well.. she didn't exactly know if one of them was a bird. She was so fast, Wings could only see a blur.
But then a hummingbird with a very sharp beak appeared.
She threw her beak against the fox, and with a sharp howl of pain, the fox limped away. Wings felt sort of sorry for this poor fox, but she couldn't focus on that right now. "Hello" Wings started awkwardly. No bird had said anything since that fox attack.
Wings looked around at the others faces. A couple birds' mouths were open in astonishment, but some other birds kept their faces as steely and hard as ever. Wings wasn't sure they were too happy about other birds taking their battle for them, but Wings didn't care about that.
Wings was actually happy because maybe she could get them to join their side. They could use more birds these days, with fox fights, evil cats and finding Speckle and all... "Would you like to...uhh... Join our bird colony?" Wings asked quickly, as if expecting the answer to be no.
 "I would love to! My name is Xena." said the bird who had been very fast. Wings had just noticed an X shaped scar on her forehead and wondered what it was from. " I would, too. My name is Stripey" said another bird in a very jolly tone of voice. "I would as well. My name is Sorrow." the bird named Sorrow said  very mysteriously... That made Wings kind of uneasy, but she let it go.
 "Will you except us? Oh and I would like to join as well. My name is Blue Wings." Another said shortly.
"Of course we will except you all." Wings said glancing over at Aqua Feather who was glaring at Blue Wings, probably just because of their name alike ness. Hopefully they will get along okay... Well I cant think about that now... we have a bird to save! Wings thought.
"Uhh... Guys... We are already a couple of miles away from where Speckle. I just simply cannot remember which way we came, and I am the smart one here!" Eclipse said matter-of-factly which bothered Wings a lot. "Well then let's make a plan" Sorrow said.


Authors note: Thank you to the recent sign-ups, I have found inspiration to write another chapter on this blog! Yay! Although I doubt anyone reads it anymore... ^.^
I hope you enjoyed this! This is the longest chapter I have written on this blog xD.


~Mia :)

11 comments:

  1. whoa this chapter is awesome! best one yet in my opinion!!!! =D

    ps. why i haven't been commenting/ on aj/ doing anything online for a while is because i moved ^-^

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  2. It's been a long time since I've been on here... I just don't go on AJ anymore.

    Well, the chapters are awesome so far, and like Kara said, I think this one is the best!

    Spirithowl- not going on AJ anymore.

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    1. It's okay. Interests change. ;)

      Aww TYSM <3 <3

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  3. Great chapter, Mia! But who attacked the bird? Xena or Sorrow? They both seem to fit the description of a hummingbird with a sharp beak.

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  4. Hey Mia!! Cool story blog! :D

    Rainbowcat1

    Oh btw, we like sooooooo much similar stuff!!! Its so weird! :O XD

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  5. Mia, why haven't you posted in two months? O.O

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  6. First of all, you might know me as Midnight. Anyways, I love it. This is actually better then the warriors series which is my favorite. Also, you really need to check it before you post because, expect was supposed to be accept. Other than that it's awesome. This book shall rule the birds!
    Love, ☽мι∂ηιgнт☾

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    1. Lol. Thanks! Wow O_O. Yes. I know, I don't write on here frequently so I should try to spell check. I will improve. :)

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